Life On A B-I7

I stumbled into the phrase cohesiveness. As applied to writing, it refers to when there are logical flaws in the context.. We’re not just talking about the tense of words not matching; we’re talking about calling something “red” and then turning around in the next sentence and calling it “blue.” (Almost that bad.) It was also pointed out to me that I love the run-on sentence. I was told to look up the definition of the “colon.” All I can say in my defense is that I haven’t paid much attention to conjunctions in the past. I’m going to have to rewire my brain to look for separate ideas and quit putting them together as one idea. (This problem is largely one of deep internal disorganization between the two hemispheres of my brain, I’m sure.)

I’m working on it…

I’ll figure out what a paragraph is at some point too…